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Fading away

written by : RuanG

Fading away, seems unlikely that I’ll stay
Captured by a ruined world that I’m so desperately trying to escape
Because I’m the only one that believes in fate,
Where I won’t be eaten alive, being used as bait

Finally released, I spread my angelic wings as I fly and twirl up high,
Into a captivating universe without once again following an earthbound lie
As I enter this unfamiliar and tranquil place
I meet millions of people sharing the very same race

Millions stand together as one
Issuing an order to go fight a battle that should surely be won
And so we march along with an enchanting cheer
As God stands in the background, shedding a tear

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awesome poem!! my entires as well are all 1st attempts writen by ahansa

It's my 1st ever poem...let me know what you guys think... writen by RuanBg@Gmail.com

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