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THE IMMORTAL SOUL ( 174 Views)
written by : angelminx
IT'S NOT HOW LONG YOU'VE LIVED
BUT RATHER HOW WELL
FOR ONLY THROUGH YOUR DEEDS
SHALL YOU SOUL BE APPRAISED
AND THE VALOUR OF YOUR SPIRIT ASCERTAINED
IT'S NOT HOW OFTEN YOU'VE LOVED
BUT RATHER HOW SINCERLEY
AS ONLY THROUGH THE GOODNESS OF YOU HEART
SHALL ITS TRUE WORTH BE KNOWN
AND THE INTELLIGENCE OF YOUR MIND REVERRED
Poem Rating - 2/10
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I love your the sincererity of your diction, the economy of your verbs and the sense as expressed by the simplicity of your writing. writen by Marota
This is a magic piece of work. writen by Wally
